Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Getting Back on Track

If you have not handed in your essay by this morning nor emailed it to me, there will be points taken off your first essay.

By today's class you should have read:

the introduction to comparison/contrast - pages 371-376
the essay by Bruce Catton: "Grant and Lee: a Study in Contrasts"
the essay by Chua: "Why Chinese Mothers Are Superior"

We will discuss a strategy for organizing your Comparison/Contrast essay today in class.
Your next essay will be due 2/26/14, if your class meets on Wednesday; it will be due 2/27/14 if your class meets Thursday.

The first day after spring break, we will discuss argumentation.
The second day after spring break, you will write your in-class essay (Essay #3).

Monday, February 3, 2014

Topics for Essay #1 - DUE THIS WEDNESDAY!!


Last Name 1

Student's First and Last Name

Mrs. Sharon Aiken

English 1101-

February 3, 2014

Topics for Essay Number One



          Note that topics for the first essay are being presented in MLA format, just in case you need a

reminder of presentation appearance. There should be one-inch margins all around; twelve-point,

plain font; an appropriate header and heading. The title is also in plain font and gives an indication of

what to anticipate in the paper. Note that the title is not boldfaced, underlined, italicized or in any

way different from the font used in the paper. For further assistance in format, refer tot he MLA

General Guidelines available at Purdue's Online Writing Lab [OWL].
 
          Topic One: Reality shows falls into many different types or categories: shows based around

celebrities, episodes that revolve around amusing or unique families, or shows based on competition

of one sort or another. Choose one type of reality show, explain why you find that type entertaining,

and develop the body of your paper around examples of shows that illustrate your point. Note that

these are not all the categories of reality shows and that some of these categories can overlap. What

might fall into reality shows that revolve around celebrities might also be included in those that

revolve around unique families, such as the Osbournes.

          Topic Two: The portability of the internet has made social networking more popular and more

available than ever. Select one type of social networking that you use and explain why you like--or

dislike--it, and whether you see it as a positive or negative addition to your life. Then provide

examples that illustrate your position.

          Topic Three: Americans are characterized in many ways: rude, self-centered, and arrogant, as

well as patriotic, generous, and optimistic. Which of these traits--or others--do you feel best

exemplifies Americans? Using your family and friends, show several examples that illustrate what

you mean.

          Remember to be broad and interesting in your introduction, lead to a definite thesis statement,

and support your thesis with specific, concrete details. Use your book as a resource to help you

compose and organize your paper, which should be between two and five pages, a MINIMUM of two

pages, double spaced.
        




RUBRIC for Essay #1 -- due the second day of this week

 Minimum Length: two double-spaced pages in MLA format; do not exceed five pages

CORRECT MLA FORMAT - 10 pts.
~ Correct header
~ Correct heading
~ Title is in correct placement, font
~ Double spaced
~ Correct margins

Introduction - 15 pts.
~ Interesting/adequate opening; uses a definite strategy, provides any needed background
~ Thesis statement is:
clearly worded
focus for paper
forceful, deliberate, strategically placed

Body Paragraphs - 25 pts.
~ support thesis statement
            ~ contain an implied or explicit topic sentence
~ fully developed with necessary details, examples, explanation, development that are “real,” clear, concrete and specific

Coherence & Unity - 25 pts.
~ information is in a logical, interesting order & sequence
            ~ no illogical OR unnecessary statements to distract
            ~ paper is fluent; flows with adequate transitions
            ~ ideas are easily followed

Grammar & Mechanics - 15 pts.
~ At the LEAST, the essay has NO:
                                    misspelled OR misused words
                                    fragments OR comma splices OR run-on sentences
                                    faulty tense shifts
                                    pronoun/antecedent errors
                                    vague pronoun references

Conclusion - 10 pts.
~ intelligent, relevant, compliments the paper
            ~ leaves reader with positive impression of composition as a whole
                       
In addition, an "A" paper contains exemplary language, correct usage, and keen insight. Though these traits are ideal, they are often the ones that separate a paper that is exceptional or outstanding from a paper that is merely very good.
           


            

Monday, January 27, 2014

Week 3, Day 1

The assignments and days/dates may be slightly skewed because two classes met twice last week; one class met only once, so prepare yourself accordingly.


NO paragraphs to write today!!


For our next class, be sure to read: David Birnbaum, "The Catbird Seat," pages 228-230 AND
the introduction to chapter 8, "Exemplification," pages 211-217


We'll discuss this essay, along with YOUR last set of paragraphs, and look ahead to your first essay.

Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Week 2, Day 1

Look over chapter 1: pages 13-28-This should be a review of the writing process; make note of anything you do not understand; READ ch. 2 & 3 more carefully, taking notes, particularly of anything you do not understand

Terms:
  • Purpose - ch.2; page 30
  • Audience - ch. 2; page 31
  • Types of Examples - ch. 8; pages 212-215
Essay for today:

"Indian Education" by Sherman Alexie - pages 142-147 in text

In a couple of paragrapths, respond to the following:

Discusss two of the incidents recounted by Sherman Alexie in his essay. Choose one episode which indicates that he was stereotyped by the white world. Choose the second episode to show how he was scorned by his reservation friends. Despite these and other adversities, what makes it clear that Alexie learns to succeed on his own terms?

Be sure to use MLA format and DO title your paper.

Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Levels of Language:

Informal
Standard English

Formal
Standard English



The following essay can be found here: "Homeless" by Anna Quindlen


Wednesday, January 8, 2014

Syllabus

Middle Georgia State College - Department of English - Spring 2014
English 1101
Instructor: Sharon Aiken – H/SS 248 - Office phone: 478-471-2893
Office hours:  T/TH: 12:00-2:00 P.M.

Email: sharon.aiken@maconstate.edu - Use your Macon State email. I check and respond only to my Macon State email. Please do I likewise, since email is used for class announcements or changes in the class schedule. 
Website:  aikenenglish1101spring2014.blogspot.com

Required Prerequisites: Students required to take English and/or Reading LearningSupport classeare not eligible for English 1101 until they have successfully completed suchcourses with a grade oA, B, or C. 
Students whose SAT, ACT, or COMPASS scores have exempted them from taking Englisand/or Reading Learning Support classes are eligible to take ENGL 1101.

MGSC and MGSC English Dept. Policy Statements:

30 Hour Rule: In accordance with Board of Regents policy, students must complete ENGL 1101and
ENGL 1102 before earning thirty hours of course credit.

Exit Requirements: All students must complete ENGL 1101 with a grade of A, B, or C toproceed to
ENGL 1102 and to receive Area A1 credit.

Regents Exemption: Students who complete both ENGL 1101 and ENGL 1102 with grades of A, Bor C have fulfilled the University System of Georgia Regents Reading and WritingRequirements.

Supplemental Instruction: ENGL 0099A Basic Writing and Grammar and ENGL 099B 
Essays anAdvanced Grammar are Learning Support classes that students may elect to take
 along witENG 1101 or in preparation for ENGL 1101.

MGSAcademic Misconduct Statement: As a Middle Georgia State College student and as a student in this class, you are responsible for reading, understandingand abiding by the MGSStudent Code of Conduct. The Student Code of Conducis included in the MGSC Student Handbook and is available online a http://www.mga.edu/student-affairs/docs/MGSC_Student_Handbook.pdf.

Policy on Disability Accommodations: “Students seeking academicaccommodations for a special need must contact Middle Georgia State College Officof Disability Services  in Macon at (478) 471-2985 or  in Cochran at  (478) 934-3023.  Students may also visit the Disability Services Officiroom 266 othe Student LifCenter othe Macon campus or in Sanford Hall on thCochran campus.”

Attendance Policy: This class follows the guidelines established by MGSC as follows: Students whose number oabsences is morthan twice the number of class meetings per week [4] mabassigned a failing gradfor the coursat the discretion of the instructor. Students who havmorabsences than the numbeof class meetings per week buless than twicthe number of class meetings per week may be penalized at the discretion of the instructor. Students who have absences which are less than or equal to the number oclass meetings per weewill not be penalized.” In addition, if you know you will be absent when a paper is due, submit your paper in advance. If you are ill and unable to come to class when a paper is due, be prepared to submit a doctor’s excuse, as well as your paper, upon return to class. (If a member of your immediate family has a health condition requiring your absence from class, remember:  that is still an absence; there are no “excused” absences; an absence is an absence.  [English 1101 and 1102 have been known to cause sprains, eczema, dandruff, sudden seizures of unknown origins, hospitalizations, broken bones, accidents, and the plague. Students and their families are most susceptible one to two days before a paper deadline. Do your work, plan ahead and protect yourself and your loved ones.]

Withdrawal Policy: “Students may withdraw from the course and earn a grade of “W” up to and including the midterm date, which occurs on October 16,2013.   After midterm, students who withdraw will receive a grade of “WF.” The MGSC Withdrawal Form, which is available online or in the Office of the Registrar, must be signed by the instructor in advance of withdrawal.”

Purpose of the Class: ENGL 1101 is a composition course focusing on techniques required for effective writing. Iemphasizes exposition, analysis, argumentation, and research skills. Instruction focuses oteaching students to think critically and write clear, precise, and effective papers that inform threader about the writer’s personal experiences, explain an idea, argue a position, and respond to aessay question prompt. This course teaches students how to introduce a topic, articulate a thesistatement, craft topic sentences, and develop claims in coherent paragraphs.

Student Learning Objectives:
·       analyze, or interpret evidence or arguments, in order to formulate and support new argumentor solve problems (MGSC General Education Learning Goal III, CriticalThinking)
·      demonstrate a collegiate competency to read critically and communicate ideasin welldeveloped written forms (MGSC General Education Learning Goal A1[Communications])
·       understand rhetorical contexts for their writing by establishing the writerrole, the audience, and the purpose of the project
·       use recursive processes thainclude collecting information, focusing, ordering, drafting, revising, and editing
·      demonstrate the techniques and skills of research, integration ofsource material, andocumentation
·      read and respond to various texts for purposes of interpretation, analysis,synthesis, evaluationand judgment
·      use conventions of writing mechanics, usage, and style to communicateeffectively for thgiven audience, 
purpose, and format (guidelinesrecommended by the Board of RegentAdvisory Committee on English).

Required Texts: Patterns for College Writing; The Things They Carried by Tim O’Brien; Pocket Style Manual with MLA Update

Required Material: 
·       jump drive - All in-class work is on computer; out of class papers will need to be composed and saved in either Ms Word or .rtf format. All work needs to be saved electronically.
·       pocket folder for research paper
·       binder in which all work may be kept and submitted at the end of the semester

Course/ Essay Requirements:

There will be five (5) essays for the semester; in addition; an in-class final exaessay is mandatory.  
At least one of the five essays must be written in class extemporaneously (withouspecific prior preparation); this in-class essay will require students to analyze, or interpret evidenceoarguments, in order to formulate and support new arguments or solve problems (Learning Goal IIIGen EdOutcomes). Also, at least one of the five essays will require students to incorporate librarresearch into theirwriting following the MLA style.

The five (5) required essays will comprise at least 70% of the course grade for ENGL 1101. A student will not pass ENGL 1101 without earning an average grade of C or better on his or her graded writing.

Essays 1, 2, 3  = 30%
Essay 4, using documentation = 20%;
Class participation, daily writing = 10%
Quizzes = 20%
Final Essay (#5)= 20%

Plagiarism Policy: If you cheat on a test, you will get a zero. If you plagiarize an assignment, that grade will result in a zero. Failing this course is the common penalty for plagiarism; it is difficult to achieve a passing grade, if one receives a zero on a plagiarized assignment worth 10% or 20%. Plagiarism occurs when a writer uses the ideas, wording, organization, etc., of another writer without proper citation, whether intentional or unintentionalThis includes having someone “help” you write the paper, buying the paper online, or lifting ideas, sentences, and/or paragraphs from another text. Keep an electronic copy of all assignments and be prepared to send it to me immediately if asked. Please go to the MSC Library site for further information on avoiding plagiarism. Note:
A plagiarism prevention service is used in the evaluation of written work submitted for this course. As directed by the instructor, students are expected to submit their assignments, or have their assignments submitted, through the service in order to meet the requirements for this course. The papers may be retained by the service for the sole purpose of checking for plagiarized content in future student submissions.

Definition of Plagiarism:

The following definition of plagiarism expands upon the Student Code’s description of plagiarism and has been adopted as standard by the English Department. For furtherexplanation and illustrationsrefer to the English Department’s Definition of Plagiarism,”available online ahttp://www.mga.edu/liberal-arts/english.

1. Iis plagiarism to copy another’s words directly and present them as your own without quotation marks and direcindication of whose words you are copying.  All significant phrases, clauses, and passages copied from another source require quotation marks and propeacknowledgment, down to the page number(s) of printed texts.

2. Iis plagiarism to paraphrase anothewriterworby altering some words but communicating the same essential point(s) made by the original author without properacknowledgment.  Though quotation marks are not needed with paraphrasing, you must still acknowledge the original source directly.

3. Plagiarism includes presenting someone else’s ideas or factual discoveries as your own.  Ifyou follow another persons general outline or approach to a topic, presenting anothers original thinking or specific conclusions as your own, you must cite the source even if yourwork is iyour own words entirely When you present anothers statistics, definitions, or statements of fact in your own work, you must also cite the source.

4. Plagiarism includes allowing someone else to prepare work that you present as your own.

5. Plagiarism applies in other media besides traditional written texts, including, but notlimited
to, oral presentations, graphs, charts, diagrams, artwork, video and audio compositions, and other electronic media such as web pages, PowerPoint presentations, and online discussionpostings.

Midterm Deadlines and Portfolios:
·      Students should have at least two graded essays returned to them before the semester’withdrawal deadline.
·      At the end of the semester, all essays are to be filed for one full semester. After onsemester,instructors may allow students to pick up their papers.

Final Examination:

It is the policy of the MGSC English Dept. that the final examination in English 1101 is a two-hour essay written in response to class reading (The Things They Carried)Students may take notes on the reading using a 3 by 5 note card. This card may not contain any full sentences, 
with the exception of documented quotes from the readings. Students will be given a choice of at least two topicbased on the reading. The student will write on one of these options: he or she will not have access tthe 
readings or tgrammar handbooks, but the student may use his or her note cards, a dictionary, and thesaurus. 
The final exaessay should reflect knowledge of the readings, but mere summary of threadings will not be acceptable. Anadditional instructions for the final exam will be provided by thinstructor. The final exam must count for 20 % of the students final grade.
Grading Scale:

Grade
Grade and Description
A
90-100 / Excellent Work
B
80-89/Good Work
C
70-79/Satisfac tory Work
D
60-69/Unsatisfactory
F
60

Class Policies:
1. Please be on time; if you drive a distance to get here, plan accordingly. Four tardies of 15 min. or more = an absence
2. Assignments are to be handed in on time, typed. Writing on class computers is part of the class; there will be both in-class and out-of-class essays.  Title all assignments and use MLA format.
3. If a hard copy of the paper is not handed in on time, in class, the date that it is due, you may email a copy of the paper, WITH PENALTIES :
a) you will automatically forfeit a letter grade off the paper
b) that essay may not be graded until the end of the semester, which is when I grade all late work
c) if it is the first or second essay, you will not have an opportunity to revise the essay for a higher grade.  
4. The student has the option of revising the first and second essays with the following stipulations:
a. The student makes time to conference with me on the mistakes noted in the paper
b. The original essay and rubric must be handed in with the revised essay
c. If the only edits made to the paper are for grammar/mechanics/corrections, the grade will remain the same (the student has only copied and corrected)
d. Substantive revisions could gain the student as much as one letter grade
5.  I will NOT accept a research paper late or via email.
6.  If you plan to print out of class essays in class, please attend to them it in the first 10 min. of class. Do NOT plan to revise, or retype your paper when you come to class—this should be done on your own.
7.  IF YOU USE ANY WORD PROCESSING PROGRAM OTHER THAN MS WORD, SAVE YOUR PAPER AS AN .rtf  (Rich Text Format) file.  Your paper cannot be opened, cannot be read, cannot be printed otherwise. Not even the tech guys and gurus in the library can help.
8.  If you miss a daily assignment, you may NOT make it up; if you FAIL TO TURN IN a major essay, your grade will result in a ZERO. You MUST complete all essays to pass the class.
9.  I expect students to demonstrate a professional demeanor in their attitude, manner and language, both written and spoken.  Turn your phones on “manner mode” if you must keep them on. Do not text, update your facebook status, shop on your tablet, or surf the web when I am teaching, when we are engaged in peer review or class discussion, or when students give a presentation. If you want to enjoy those activities, I will ask you to leave the class. This class asks only two hours and a thirty minutes of your undivided attention each week. If that is too difficult, you should reconsider whether you are serious about this class.
10.   There should be no open food or drink in the computer lab.
11.   Please do not distract others who are working or paying attention in this class. I respect your right to fail this class, but not your right to infringe upon others who may want to pass. No one needs to be distracted.
12.   While you may have graduated from a high school that upheld the motto: “Failure is not an option,” please be advised that failure is an option in college. Unless you were held to high standards previously and take your education seriously, you may find that your grades are lower than they were in high school.
13.  Use your jump drive to keep an electronic copy of ALL your essays in the event you need to re-submit one
14.   Active Participation is expected from every student in class and is worth ten percent of your final grade. It begins but does not end with attendance and includes the following:

Criteria
25 pts.
20 pts.
15 pts.
0-10 pts. & below
Attendance
Attends class regularly – with no more than 1 absence at mid-term; usually prompt & professional
Attends class regularly; no more than 1 absence at mid-term; professional & seldom tardy
Attends class regularly; may have more than 2 absences at this point; professional
Has missed more than 2 days and often presented as unprofessional
Level of Active Engagement
Proactive in class; contributes with ideas, questions, observations; answers questions; treats classmates & professor with courtesy
Contributes to class; frequently offers comments, answers & asks questions; treats classmates & professor with courtesy
Offers some observations and answers questions now and then or when called on; treats classmates & professor with courtesy
Rarely contributes to class by offering ideas or asking questions.primarily a non-participant. Does not add to class discussion, but sits silently.
Listening Skills
Listens when others talk; builds on others’ ideas; involves others in class by asking questions or seeking others’ responses
Listens then others talk; frequently builds on ideas of others.
Listens when  others talk, but does not respond to ideas
Often does not listen when others talk; often distracted by his/her own agenda—e.g., the internet, studying for another class, talking to peers, when inappropriate
Preparation
Almost always prepared for class, with assignments and required class materials
Usually prepared for class
Frequently prepared for class
Seldom prepared

The Writing Center is NOW OPEN; additional information will be forthcoming, but it is in your best interest to use the writing center to improve your writing

IMPORTANT DATES:

·       Full session classes begin: January 13
·       Last day to change existing schedules for full classes: January 16
·       Last day for No-Show reporting: January 28
·       College Closed for MLK Holiday: January 20
·       First Financial Aid Disbursement Date: February 12
·       SPRING BREAK: March 3-7
·       Mid-term: March 12
·       Early Registration for Summer and Fall (current students): March 24-April 17
·       Last Day of Full Session Classes: May 5
·       Final Exams for Full Session Classes:  May 6-9
·       Grades Available on SWORDS: May 15
·       Commencement: May 16

**
Grading and Assignments:
Assignment
Percent
of Grade
Tentative Due Date
Essay # 1 – Exemplification
10
Essay #2 – Comparison/Contrast
10
Essay #3 –  Argumentation: Extemporaneous, in-class essay to assess Core Curriculum (MGSC General Education Learn Goal III, Critical Thinking)
10
Essay #4 – Researched Argumentation Essay, using MLA format
20
Quiz 1 – this quiz will cover all aspects of composition, MLA format, and argumentation to this point
10
Quiz 2 – over the novel, The Things They Carried
10
Class Participation – please keep in mind that class participation begins but does not end with attendance and could include written or oral responses to assigned readings
10
FINAL ESSAY  – Literary Analysis over 
20

The best way to develop your writing is to read, read, read. There are no shortcuts, no easy outs, and no simple solutions. Read everything, good and bad, exciting and mediocre, suspenseful and boring. You will gradually begin to develop a sense of identifying good writing that is coherent and clear, complete, as well as concise. Bad writing will show you what to avoid; good writing will show you what to emulate. This class does not meet every day, but if you truly want to succeed and develop, not only in this class, but in college and in life, it is in your best interest to read every day and, if at all possible, to write every day. Seek help when you need it. Find your voice and remain true to it; take pride in your work. Do your best, whether your best is a “C” or an “A.”

“Writing is easy; all you have to do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper until the drops of blood form on your forehead.”    Gene Fowler

Tentative Schedule by the Week—reading selections should be completed by the date announced in class and noted on syllabus; unless noted, all reading selections refer to Patterns for College Writing; EXPECT changes in the following schedule

01/13: Assign complete syllabus to be read; focus in class on most relevant items; discussion of professional attitude, levels of language, critical and active reading and its connection to writing—pgs. 13-27 in text.  Second day of class—discussion of pgs. 29-75 and Chapter 8: Exemplification, 211-216

01/20: MLK HOLIDAY

 01/21:   Reading selections: David J. Birnbaum,  228, “The Catbird Seat,” Questions : Purpose and Audience [P.A.], all; Style and Structure [S&S]: all; Vocabulary exercises [V.E.]: 2 & 3. Brent Staples, 240, “Just Walk on By: A Black Man Ponders His Power to Alter Public Space,” Questions: Comprehension [C], 1 & 2; P.A., all; S&S, 2 & 3; V.E., 2; assign topics for the first essay

01/27: Day one: Essay #1 DUE; introduction to Chapter 11: Comparison/Contrast,  371-379; Bruce Catton, “Grant and Lee: A Study in Contrasts,” 393; Amy Chua, “Why Chinese Mothers Are Superior,” 410; Questions on Chua: C: all; P & :, 1, 2,3; S & S: 1, 2, 3, 5; V.E: 2; online essays will also be assigned

02/03:  Complete discussion of Chua; discussion of Nicholas Carr and Steven Johnson on the internet

02/10:  Discussion/lecture: how to compare and contrast two different reading selections; day two: in-class essay #2

02/17: Chapter 14: Argumentation, 525-542 & Thomas Jefferson, “The Declaration of Independence,” 553-556; questions: C: all; P & A: all; S & S: 3, 4; V.E.: 2 &3; day two, focus on logical fallacies, 537-540

02/24: Reading selections: “Should American Citizenship Be a Birthright?” and the two accompanying essays, 593-603; questions, 597: C: all; P & A: 1& 2; S & S: all; V.E.: 2; questions, 600: C: all; P & A, 1, 2, 5; S & S: 2 & 3; V.E.: 2; assign essay; essay # 3 due on day two.

03/03 – 03/07: SPRING BREAK

03/10: Lecture/discussion: documentation. How to accurately and correctly begin research and incorporate material  into an essay in MLA format. Works Cited Page. Internal citations.  Discussion and choice of Organ Donation Policy or Government Tax on Sugary Drinks

03/17: In-class work on research essay

03/24: Day one: in-class work on research essay; day two: research essay #4 due.

03/31:  Day one: quiz #1; day two, Chapter 13: Definition, 489-500 and reading selections, “Tortilla,” 507 and “Wife-Beater,” 516. Questions, TBA.

04/07: Begin essay #5, the extended definition essay, in class; day two, essay #5 due

04/14: Lecture/discussion on The Things They Carried, with Tim O’Brien youtube video; day two, discussion of the first two stories, “The Things They Carried” and “Love”

04/21: day one: quiz #2 over the novel; day two: character assignments, as part of class participation

04/28:

05/05: Last Scheduled Day of Regular Class

05/06-05/09: Final Exams